October 29, 2007

The Best Haikus Ever Written

Pollution
Sulfur in the sky
The smog makes it hard to see
As I cough and wheeze

Bear Attack
Oh god, please save me
It is going to eat me
I still want to live

Fish
There is a small fish
It swims around in the lake
Then it gets eaten

6 comments:

  1. Anonymous11:56 PM

    So blunt. Show, do not tell...

    Pointing at the moon
    Reminded of simple things
    Moments matter most

    B.Y. Penman

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    1. i love your haiku. i hope you make more!!

      -Bree

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  2. i love haikus. they are part of my life. let this haiku bless your soul. i am 11 years old and go to fms (forestveiw middle school). enjoy my haiku, please.

    FLARE
    Burn with me, my friend.
    Put your hands in the ashes
    Love me, me only.

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  3. btw, my haiku is trademarked.

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  5. Perfect Vacation...

    When the memory
    Makes all the troubles of life
    Just drift, drift away

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